Evaluation

January 8, 2009

My coursework out line was to create a college magazine front cover and contents page using photoshop and other image manipulation programs. I chose to go for the print option, the front cover had to feature a medium close up of a student and other generic conventions of a magazine. My first reaction was to research the style and layout my target audience would want. I looked a few magazines some mostly just any to get and idea of how they and what’s needed. Once I had decided what magazine I wanted to do look further into that audience. My idea was to create a magazine purely for photography students, helping them with advice on cameras, equipment, college and university courses and much more. The main aspect and the unique selling point was to feature other students word from all different colleges around the country. After deciding this I looked at a lot more photography and art based magazines to gain a good understanding of what that audience would be looking for and used to. I came to the conclusion that the less on the front cover the more appealing it became, I personally also like this style so i decide to make sure this was reflected in my plans and final piece. I started of with just a few sketches and and some lay out plans to get a basic idea for my front cover. I also sketched the idea and design I had for the front cover picture. the lay out was something I thought was very important, I first thought about the magazines we see everyday and the slightly hectic look the front covers have, I thought this would be the sort of thing to follow, but after my research I realized that this is not what my audience wanted. In the construction stage it took me a while to get to grips with photoshop, now I’m fairly confident with it and feel I can achieve a lot using it. I started off using a basic photograph I had, the one I was originally going to use on the front cover. After some decision and using a questionnaire I decided that the image i used was maybe not exactly the right photograph. The comments I received highlighted the fact that the image did not really show a student. My original sketch was to have a model holding a camera taking a picture, so this would look a lot more like a student. I made a few adjustments to the front cover and ended up with the piece I have now. In photoshop I first edited my image, it was a simple picture much like what I sketched in the first stages, I did some basic editing first, changing the levels and curves to gain the most out of the image. After the main adjustments I went to image, adjustments, and then black and white. I used this because I feel it gives it creates the nicest black and white image. My draft front cover was used as an outline for my final front cover. I decided on bold lines and simple fonts and the minimal amount of information on the front cover because this is what I found my audience preferred. I started with just a plain layer, I then added a gradient to create the background, I did plan on having the photograph fit the whole page but as it was a landscape image I decided to place it in the top half of the page. I then continued to add the Mast head, tag lines etc… I didn’t use any buzz words as I feel they clutter the page. I used some plugs to intrigue people to buy the magazine. I made sure the photograph I used was a medium close up, to relate to my brief. Up until this point I felt very confident in what I had done. The challenge came when I got a bit experimental with all my work, I started using some gradients and different font overlays and outer lines to create different effect, this really helped me gain a better understanding and become more advanced with photoshop. After applying the basics I added a few adjustments, like for example a bar code because this is one of the most common things on the front cover of a magazine. A slogan was also featured to keep the common aspects of the magazine. I think I did very well in creating my front cover and have kept to the brief, I have designed it around my target audience. The contents page was kept to the same theme which was very minimal, I like the look of the contents page it has a nice elegance to it. Applying the image to the top of the contents page was the biggest challenge I had, I had to get the exact measurements to make it fit perfectly with out looking warped. I discovered through time and patience that photoshop had a ruler tool. This taught me that with enough patience you will find what you need. I really like the way this looks it does look a lot better than just adjusting the size using free transform. The whole theme of my front cover and contents page is to keep it all in black and white, I like this idea mainly because if I saw it on a self it would appeal to me, seen as not many other front covers would be in black and white. It was something I stumbled across, its only really happened because the original image I used for my draft was in black and white. I’m glad I decided to do this because it really makes the whole cover.

With my final piece, I had a tough decision between two examples of my front cover. When making the decision I was taking into account the brief and how well it relates back to it, also which had the nicer look and the USP of my style and Genre of magazine. Of the two designs both ticked some boxes, I much rather preferred the design of the first draft I produced, it had that certain elegance to it and the verisimilitude of a front cover. The other my recent design contain every the other did, apart from the main image. I decided to go with the second because through my focus group and replies I got from that I realised that the main image didn’t relate to my brief of having an student featured in the picture. The new image contained a student holding a camera taking a picture, this relates to the brief and also the how context on the magazine. When making this second draft I had not originally decided to have the small Polaroid placed on the cover, there was nothing filling this space. After discussions with friends and asking a few questions I realised that it looks very bland and boring with nothing there, I was going to just have the picture with a white frame and not the Polaroid style frame because I thought this would be too cliché and very common. I experimented and tested to see how it all looked and when trying out the Polaroid frame I realised it suited the whole essence of the cover, it added more white to the page balancing out the black. I made this decision because I felt it was better for the USP of the magazine, but still kept to my plan of the clean style front cover, it was also something my research had helped to decide. My previous drafts, I felt didn’t stand up to what I needed from the brief. After taking careful consideration into my focus group and taking in the comments I had received. I made decisions in creating iconic signs placed on the front cover to gain the audiences interest and attention. It can also create meaning as it will be easier for them to connect to the person featured on the front cover, as they are a student. To attract and address my audience I used iconology which creates the effect of placing a genre over my magazine, the name for example ‘Aperture’ is a term strongly related to photography, the camera also works in the same way. The magazine creates he representation of a young magazine, alternately this could be a downfall for the magazine. Placing a Student on the front cover may put off the older audience. Obviously as this will be published and sold in a college, there wont be much of a market for the older audience. When talking about narrative I feel that the cover can tell a very strong story, relating to an article featured in the magazine. The picture features a student but a student taking a picture, the shot shows action and someone getting out there and actually doing it. It creates an inspiration for the audience, they see some one doing it, so they want to as well. I have learnt a lot about the industry through my research, for example where it would be published places best to sell it. The institution that will have to publish the magazine, I feel this is something I have failed to mention in making a realistic front cover and contents, I have not discussed it at all neither have I placed logo’s or company publishing names on the pages. This is something I shall remember for my preliminary task.

In comparison with other media products there is a clear style that emerges. A very neat, uncluttered front page much like Digital SLR magazine, after researching and seeing this magazine style I realised this was the style and some what stereotype these magazines had. My Front cover and contents address the audience in a very similar way, they are both very inviting and keep everything to a minimum. The mast heads appear at the top, not to overwhelming and a medium size. I personally think if a mast head is to large it becomes very cramped and also intimidating, the mast head is the right size, well seen, eye catching and enticing. Both use a very simple and readable type face. A few lines of writing bellow the mast head and some above. In comparison the DSLR magazine does have a lot more on it, there are a few things that I have failed to include in my font cover, a competition for example its a good way to lure a reader. I think my product fits in with the whole stereotype and iconic look of a photography magazine, the photograph is the main concentration on the page, its not only the primary image its the primary lure. I personally feel from a buyers point of if the picture isn’t good, I won’t buy the magazine. People generally view magazines just as much as they read them, so they will go by what they see. I think that my magazine would fit into the audiences expectations, bearing in mind that its a totally different institution and market. I’m aiming to appeal to students, where as DSLR has to aim to adults and younger, I think its target audience would be around 13- 40, male and female. Mine has a target audience of mostly 14-23 depending on its distribution and publishing areas. On comments from my focus group from my peers, a mixed group of people some interested in the subject some with no interest at all. After seeing responses I am fairly confident that this would be received well by my target audience. The symbolic codes are part of the reason I feel it was as successful as it was, I found using a student was a great way of addressing the audience, they gather from first viewings that this magazine would be aimed at a younger audience. The use of an attractive young female is another way that might have attract them to the front cover and contents page. I decided to use a female instead of a male because after some consideration I feel that the male audience are more likely to view the magazine first then read, where as female I feel are more into the article side then the photographs. The use of complete black and white was received well by my focus group, its was found to be more eye catching due to its difference. I added the Polaroid to add to the visual appeal of the front cover, after seeing the DSLR front cover I realised that this was something that most magazines did, I decided to use the Polaroid frame, so I could use the bottom part to place so text on, a tag line, detail what’s is the magazine.


Focus Group and Questionnaire

December 18, 2008

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Comments on both designs. 1st design being the one with the male model in the field . 2nd being the girl taking a picture.

1. What is your first impression of the 2 designs?

Responses-

“They look very professional and clean.”

“I like it, the use of very little colour is effective and makes the writing stand out.”

“For the front cover i like the lighting behind the model in the first design, it looks very professional. The contents page is set out neatly and again the picture are very good quality.”

2. Do you like the overall style of the magazine?

Responses-

“Yes it looks modern and clean.”

“Yes its very easy on the eye and easy to read.”

“Yes, although the front cover does seem slightly empty on the 1st design, maybe if it had the Polaroid on it, it might be a little more eye catching. the overall design of the magazine, keeping it simple suits the black and white theme.”

3.What do you like and dislike?

“I like the layout of both contents and front cover, i also like the photographs.”

“I like the colours and layout of the contents, I don’t dislike anything but i think the front cover picture could be a little more clear.”

“I like the pictures however i don’t like the positioning of one on the contents.”

4. Do you think the my work fits the brief?

“Yes, they do look like college students”

“Yes, it does have everything asked for, the medium close up, the student.”

“Yes it all fits.”

5. Being at college, if you saw the magazine would you buy it?

“Yes because its something I’m interested in and its eye catching.”

“Personally I’m not interested in photography, but if i was i would buy it  because the pictures are taken well and it looks very professional.”

“I don’t think so, photography’s not really in my interests.”

6. As a student would you find the magazine useful?

“Yes, due to the articles etc…”

“Yeah, i like the editors note, its useful and friendly.”

“Yes if i was doing photography.”

Other comments i  have received were that in the first design, the main image doesn’t exactly look a lot like a student doing photography, also the location is not college related. One thing i got frequently was that the first design was slightly to bland, as good as it looked it needed a little more.

Comments on the second design were a lot better, i was told it relates more, you can see the student clearly with a camera. I personally think the second has a better representation of a student, it contains more iconic signs to the college student, the camera is a hint straight away an iconic item linking with the whole point of the magazine. the Polaroid is something that everyone loved, it finishes the magazine and gives it that little more it needs. The mise en scene of the magazine is  like by my peers, the layout, the design. From this feed back i feel i  have succeeded it creating a magazine with high like ability and verisimilitude.


Further research into magazine front covers.

December 16, 2008

 Digital SLR photography

I have researched into magazines, but only in general here i shall be discussing the aspects of a photography magazine. Although they may target slightly different audiences’ and servea different purpose, i see a relation between the 2. I feel i made the right choice in keeping it minimal, the mise en scene of this cover is all organized around the the primary image. This front cover has a few more plugs and interest lines to gain the readers attention and attract them to read the magazine. I personally felt as this would be a magazine, where the institution may be the college, it ma not have a wide range of competition in that market area.

This cover contains strong colours and bold titles, everything is kept neat and very clean, unlike the ‘showbiz’, gossip type magazines, which contain a very busy and hectic front cover. The colours of fonts and other pugs on the page are maintained at a very bland level, this is because the reader/viewer are meant to be drawn straight to the picture. A competition is featured as a lure, to gain the readers interest in a prize, this then selling the magazine. Photography terms are used to add to the iconic image of a photography magazine, the word ‘Aperture’ is straight away associated with photography and photographers.

A few things that have now been brought to my attention after viewing this. Featuring a competition will prover to be a good lure and selling point for my magazine. A bigger masthead maybe needed, as i feel mine may not be too eye catching. These are just a few things i may add to my front cover.


Questionnaire Responses

November 27, 2008

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After gathering some responses, one thing that was highlighted was the image, although it was liked, its was not to clear. This picture still follows the black and white theme, but u have an image which i personally think relates to the task out lines more. I then added a few more parts to the cover, changes some things and adding the Polaroid, style photograph in.picture-2


Contents Adjustments and questionnaire

November 20, 2008

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This is the next step in my contents page, after getting some responses from the questionnaire back. I realized that the contents was slightly plain and missed a few things. So after reading the responses and doing some research i realized i was missing an Editors note. I added the note and then change the position of  the second content column to fit the note in, i moved it down and placed the note above it. I was going to put a picture of me or some one as the editor, but i felt that the images on the page already dominated the page and that another image would draw away the simplicity of my over all style.

The questionnaire 

1. What is you first impression of the front cover and the contents page?

 

2. Do you like the over all style of the magazine?

 

3. What do you like or dislike?

 

4. Do you think of the photographs used, do you think they are appropriate?

 

5. If you saw the magazine on a self would you buy it and what is your reason for your answer? 

 

6. As a student would you find this magazine useful as well as entertaining?

 

7. Any other comments about the front cover and contents page?

I am still waiting for some responses but i have received a few.


Contents Page Draft

November 13, 2008

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contents-page2

 

The contents page is very simple and i have tried to keep it to the same theme as my front cover. I have used the same fonts and the style of underlining the main mast head. I personally like the way the photograph at the top looks, its makes the page look more interesting but still simple.

It was made in the same way as the front cover, i used stroke on some of the text and a gradient to make more detail in the background. Although this is a draft, i am very pleased with the outcome and may consider using it for the final piece. All photographs featured in the contents page are my own images.

I started off with a plain white background and eventually built up the layers. the image was the first thing to put on the page. I do feel that there needs to be a little more on this contents page, so i shall research it a bit more and think of different things to put on the page.


Media Magazine Draft 2

November 6, 2008

This is the template i made for my magazine cover, most of the cover will stay the same the only thing that i might change is the Photograph.

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My first first draft that was posted before was not much different, the only mistake i made was that i did not make the document size A4. i corrected this in this draft and added a few more pieces to the cover. I added some tag lines/ cell lines, feature lines and more.

I really like the title for the magazine, i like the minimal style we have decided to keep it simple because after research it is what my target audience like.


Photoshop Mock up.

October 23, 2008

 

Mock up Front cover

Mock up Front cover

 

 

This is the final mock up front cover. i spent a fair amount of time in this mock up and thoroughly enjoyed getting the experience on photoshop.

This was the main image i started with, its a picture taken by my of a close friend. I made a mistake when inserting the photograph, i didn’t contain it in an A4 size, so the final product came out in the wrong shape.

 

After A few experiments with fonts and gradients i created the title seen in the screen grab. Me and james decided that this font would look best. We’re working together but we are both producing different front covers and contents pages, we are both just keeping the title and layouts similar.

After adding the title, i then added the price and a small synapses bellow it. The one thing i would change is the size of the price. I also need to add a date.

After, i then added a line across bellow the title, a picture of a camera and also the barcode. 

 

I feel this is a very good attempt at my magazine cover. and look forward to making the final piece.


Photoshop

October 16, 2008

 

Experiments on photoshop.


Production log SMART Targets.

October 9, 2008

S-Specific

M-Measurable

A-Agreed

R- Realistic

T-Time based

Specific-

Find examples of front cover and contents pages. Look at the layouts. Research into creative ideas and examples.

Measurable-

Present what I’ve found and get feed back to see if what i have found is useful.

Agreed Apon-

Gaining good feed back and knowing that what I’ve found is good.

Realistic-

Having the available things to gain research and not setting my self to much to research.

Time based-

Not spending to much time on the research and setting a reasonable amount of time to do it.

Target

Specific-

Have a good knowledge of photo shop and in design.

Measurable-

When i have good experience of the programes and evidence to prove it.

Realistic-

Being able to access the soft ware needed and the reseources.

Time Based-

Not spending to much tie but a fair amount to gain a good idea of the programmes.

 Practice at a magazine article

Practice at a magazine article